The Servant of Shadows

tanitha's picture

Through the misty rain a lone raptor staggered around, the dampness glistening on it's scales. It's bridle dragged in the ground as it nudged at it's fallen master, but when the Troll did not move it raised it's head to the sky and screamed - a primal sound that echoed off the narrow walls of this valley. She watched it for a few moments before turning back to her companions inside the warm shelter of the mine.

"That was too close," Elyshia said as she spat the taste of blood out of her mouth. This cursed rain had soaked into her clothes and turned her hair into untidy straggles. Her robe sucked at her limbs, a distraction which had almost proved fatal in this last engagement. She plucked it loose feeling the chill of winter against her skin.

Ulgriff kneeled next to her, muttering a prayer in the Dwarven tongue that made his hands glow golden for moment before the warmth of it's healing spread through her.

"That it was lass, that it was," he said, shifting his weight and adjusting the heavy plate shoulders that shielded his neck, "They'll be back though, filthy greenskins always are. Ye keep a good watch out for us."

Elyshia snorted, even now the lithe form of Lurelai was out there somewhere. Whatever had broken her so many years ago left her without even the sense to come in out of the rain. Every once in a while she'd see the Elf dancing nimbly, soaked to the skin and with mud squealshing between her toes. Rogue was damn good in a fight though. Her daggers were quick as lightning and she glided through her foes with an unnerving and unnatural grace, stepping from shadow to shadow.

Now though the three of them could breathe a bit as the peasants worked feverishly to extract as much ore as possible. The Horde would be back. They always were. She and the motley crew who answered the call had their stronghold in Trollbane hall. From there they could see the narrow valley that housed the mine, the blacksmith where the gold could be smelted and off to the east the lumber mill perched on the heights. The lumber was essential for feeding the blacksmith. And usually only around a dozen manned the hall as the peasants worked feverishly to gather what was required for the war effort. Far too few to spread amongst these vital resources. Far, far too few.

But they'd held and held and held as the Horde broke upon them. This last battle for the mine the last in many days and it had left her limbs languid with weariness.

As she settled herself more comfortable, looking out into the rain, she could feel her mind drifting back to the fight.

What had seemed to be an avalanche of fur, green skin and green eyes that glowed with arcane energy decended on them - the heavy tread of Kodo rumbling the earth with the ravenous cries of the raptors adding their own disconcordant notes to the cacophany of war.

No time to think as she parried the first stroke with her staff and pivoted, curses flying from her mouth as the shock shivered up her arm. A light touch on a furry shoulder and the green glow surrounded his body. Tauren held an amazing reservoir of life force, something she could siphon off in the battle as she ducked under a wild swing. Tap with the staff and the shock in his eyes as her curse wracked his limbs with agony. Then the searing stench of arcane fire, a searing pain that crisps her skin and agony. Oh the agony as her flesh begins to bubble before Ulgriff's blessing draws the fire away, his steadfast Dwarven prayers accompanied by the skull crunching thudd of a mace, leaving the Blood Elf splayed like a squashed insect.

Twitching.

It was never pretty, she thought as the blood washed away in the rain. Never pretty. But that was life in Arathi Basin.

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Stigg's picture

Really, have you ever considered apping to write on of those Official Warcraft books? I opened one up in the store the other day and got bored with it rather quickly. Everything you write is amazing.

And if not, have you ever considered writing a full-fledged book? Something on the side and just write in it when you get the chance?

As usual Siskel and Stigg give you Two thumbs up!



This is amazing, Tanitha! My battles in AB are always very unexciting in a 5 horde vs a lonely mage = one dead gnome way, but this really gives an epic feel to it all. It makes you imagine what it would be like to live in Azeroth, defending the valuable resources against the might of the horde, counting only on your own skill and your friends to pull you through another skirmish.


tanitha's picture

Thank you Stigg and thank you Mangara. I have thought of it, but my biggest problem is not having a larger story arch. I can pick up individual little snippets, but turning that into a full novel? How?


Pipkin's picture

I'd hazard to say: write what you call the "individual snippets" when it strikes you, save/collect them and then, on a day that has you feelin' scribe-like - try to find a way to bring them together. As it's your own writing, I would think it ought to flow well together once you have a sit with it and find that fine thread with which to weave it all together. :)

[edit: i do like the way you write, it's not saturated with "purple prose" (y'know, when peeps get so carried away with description you're about to tear your eyes out of their sockets and holler "JUST GET ON WITH IT!") - which is a good thing. kudos!]


Stigg's picture

To be perfectly honest, I could see you coming up with a whole world and writing from the perspective of being in it. Kind of like the way Tolkien did with Middle Earth. Granted, he spent a lifetime creating his world and with himself being such an amazing linguist and historian...but with your creativity, if given enough time, I am certain you could imagine up some wondrous places.

Its something I wish I would spend some time doing...


tanitha's picture

Well, that requires time. Lots and lots of time, which I already have a scarcity off between two jobs, a daughter, roleplaying, World of Warcraft and whatever else life decides to throw at me. As it is, I feel like Bilbo Baggins' butter at the moment, spread rather thinly.

Maybe the answer is to roll a new character and to play that character through from level 1 to level 80 and to highlight adventures and quests to create a complex story line. I.E. try to follow the main story in World of Warcraft from the viewpoint of this character, weaving my own tale around it.

Then send it to Blizzard as a fan-fiction submission :)


Stigg's picture

Ya know, that sounds like a simply brilliant idea! Hmm, now then....as you may or may not know, the first step, even before choosing your character's class, is to pick a server. Now, I am no expert by any means, but a little birdy told me that there was a realm....Kellogs? No...thats not it...Kacgos? Erm.....possibly....Kalecgos? Yes. Yes, that is it...that was a wondrous realm, filled with people who are simply amazing and brilliant.



Have you read the 'Welcome to Azeroth, they said' stories by Amienne on the official EU boards? I think you'll love them. Here is a link to a post on the realm forums that has them all neatly lined up: Link

It's an idea for what you could do: she highlights certain events in the leveling of her character. This means she writes snippets, but with an underlying storyline we all know too well: the progress through zones and dungeons.

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